Dark Star part 6

Character Designs

 fixed the blocky hair ash and Kiro had and added extra details to darcy to show that mechanic/tinkerer occupation, these will be the final designs and i will do these poses specifically in colour and then adding the character description next to the individuals and have that printed for the 1st exposition on the 29th of march

other story idea's 

obviously Kiro's sudden leaving from his military training is meet with harsher consequences that the other two, to abandon the military in this world is seen as unpatriotic, and when the government, education system and military are all owned by the same group, and that group has manipulated the minds of its people under there rule to see that as criminal , this puts Kiro in a difficult situation whenever in helmscroft.

the previously described killer who drives the main characters out of helmscroft was created only to live shortly after his roll was complete, i may have a sub-story to how he has been created with the idea in his mind that killing Darcy and Ash, and follows shortly after the main characters have been through a area, but through the groups actions of saving people and Darcy's convincing come to see his reality being so tunnel visioned, an outcome not intended by the "manipulator of events" befoure he passes he tells the team that creations dont live long beyond there expected fate, darcy and ash being created are scared by this but keep the secret still.